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Re: Art/Design Help!

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Or you could always go the artistic, controversial way and show pictures of gas masks, armed soldiers, anarchy signs and bombs, as a way of portraying what some countries portray peace as. Think outside of the box, yo!
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I like the first one better
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haaha yeah everyone does XD
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Re: Art/Design Help!

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Haha, there's that badass picture I liked in your talent section thread. Very good on the coloring of this one. I see progress, which is not something I'm just saying to be nice (I feel no need to impress anyone, so genuinely my compliments are merited). The tints and shades are much more subtle than your first one, which makes it that much better. Something I did notice that didn't really strike my fancy was the color of the tube. It being kin colored, I was confused at first as to what I was looking at. Then I saw the execution of the whole 'transparency' dealio and it struck me that I may be semi-retarded, but I would watch out on future projects on making different objects that are touching contrast each other. In this case, since the color could be anything, I'd go with something a bit more fun and summer-like, like hot pink or a light blue. I like the transparency idea, but I'd also add some glare to show the glossiness/reflection of sunlight. Very good though!

Second one I'm a bit hesitant of. The first and foremost rule of thumb is to never mix raster and vector images (Mixing your drawing with a real-life picture), especially when the picture is low-res. This one isn't too pixelated, but I do see some fuzziness. I do see you added some wrinkles, which look good, only I'd add some width to the lines where appropriate to add depth. They look a bit flat at the moment.

Good job though, keep up the great work.
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Maybe with the second one you could use the effects in photoshop to make the background look more part of the picture. Also the lines added to the pants to make them look baggy, well bottom part looks great but above that, they kinda just look like lines and squiggles.

I like the effect you did with the tube in the first one. Only problem I see is the proportions of the bigger girl, her body seems a bit long and skinny.
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Re: Art/Design Help!

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hahahah yeah i know i think i just wanted to throw a background behind Lazerus! and Wolf's hips are too skinny XD HEhehehe I could only think of orange for the tube, and i forgot to add the shine to it but i will when i get back home!! thanks for all the comments guys already colouring a new picture!

oh and when i get home i'll upload the finished pic of lazerus before i slapped him on the fire XD
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The hands look really weird, too small. And theres a proportion problem. But your coloring is improving.
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http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f280/ ... LOVERS.jpg

WARNING FOR KIDDIES NAKED PARTS NO LOOKY
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lol, perhaps should put warning to younger users not to look at that.

However it's good, no real problems other than arms bend at weird spots and looks like one of his fingers are being broken or he lost it hehe.
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Re: Art/Design Help!

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Heheheh okay!! And I can never do hands D:
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lol they were pretty good this time apart from that one finger XD
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hahaha thankies :D
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http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f280/ ... 1212080257

Some more nekid bits sort of

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better! you're getting good!
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