Never-Before-Heard Episodes of Inuyasha

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OH MY GOD!! THATS THE FIRST TIME I'VE SEEN BAKAYASHA BLUSH!!!!

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lol

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It is it is it is!!

[BakaYasha7583]

LAMO. ...i...think we scared away our fanfic dude.

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VICTORY! *roars*

[Biki]

u ppl r silly. and that waz 2 much 4 me 2 read so can some1 summarize it 4 me?

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VICTORY! *roars*

You may have won the battle, but the war is still not over because I'm back with more crap. But just to let you know, I am convinced that all of this is not real. But because all of this information is extremely interesting, let's just assume that this topic is a fanfic. But going back to the summary for the new Inuyasha episode #2, there is a complete chapter form for that summary (in which there is dialogue and scenes) which is in this post.

<b><u>Note to Reader</b></u>: There are many episodes after the new Inuyasha episode #1 titled 'Toukijin's Mind-Reading Powers' which are episodes about Sesshomaru discovering a training area and becoming fully trained and discovering Toukijin's mind-reading powers, and also about Naraku who has very slowly acquired all of the Sacred Jewel shards Inuyasha and his friends have gathered. But in the introductory information that is explained below, the part that says that the Sacred Jewel is now only one shard away from being fully assembled is how the new Inuyasha episode #2 titled 'Kohaku's Death and Naraku's Rebirth' starts out. So therefore, if the total number of episodes after the final chapter of the manga is 60, episode 40 would be titled 'Toukijin's Mind-Reading Powers' and episodes 41-55 would be the episodes that are about what I've just explained above which is Sesshomaru discovering a training area and becoming fully trained. And of course, the new Inuyasha episode #2 titled 'Kohaku's Death and Naraku's Rebirth' would be episode 56. But as for the part in the introductory information that's about Naraku acquiring most of the Sacred Jewel shards and recreating his original castle, that happens in episode 39 or an episode that is between 1-39 (if the total number of episodes after the final chapter of the manga is 60). Also, the time Inuyasha and Sesshomaru end up becoming true brothers is in an episode that is between 1-39 (providing that, again, the number of episodes after the final chapter of the manga is 60).

<b><u>Introductory Information</b></u>: Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have now become true brothers. But however, Sesshomaru has chosen his own path—to be distant from Inuyasha and his friends and to train to discover Toukijin’s new power and to also become more powerful than Naraku (who has now acquired most of the Sacred Jewel Shards and has become exceedingly powerful despite the fact that his relocated heart has been destroyed and has also recreated his original castle [which has been destroyed] and has also created an impenetrable barrier around it). So therefore, now that Sesshomaru has discovered a training area, he now trains very hard as to where he would be able to predict an enemy’s every move and also to become much more stronger and faster. But as for Inuyasha, he is now becoming more and more bonded to Kagome and does not wish to become human nor full demon with the Sacred Jewel because Inuyasha thinks that relying on Tetsusaiga is his true power and also has a strong desire to destroy Naraku once and for all. But as for Naraku who has become exceedingly powerful, he has now acquired most of the Sacred Jewel Shards and then returns back to his original castle with his valued incarnation—Kanna (who was forced to be at Naraku's side after Mourymaru's defeat despite the fact that Kanna wanted Naraku dead). But once returned back to his original castle (which is destroyed), Naraku recreates the castle which makes it an illusion castle. So therefore, now that Naraku has recreated his original castle, he then creates yet another barrier around his castle that is now impossible to break. Even with the Dragon-Scaled Tetsusaiga, the Red Tetsusaiga, and the Kongousouha, Inuyasha is no match for this barrier. But the reason why Naraku has chosen to remain in hiding is because Naraku wishes to battle Inuyasha at his full power which means that Naraku wishes to acquire all of the Sacred Jewel shards in order to transform into a demon of immeasurable power, and only then will he battle Inuyasha and his friends. So therefore, the whole time Sesshomaru has been training at his training area (which not only is a place where Sesshomaru trains which is a place that is very far away from Naraku's Castle, but is also a place where Sesshomaru as well as Rin, Jaken, and Ah-Un live), all of the Sacred Jewel Shards Inuyasha and his friends have gathered have been stolen and have very slowly worked their way up to Naraku. And, yes, Inuyasha and his friends have managed to gain back some of their Sacred Jewel shards from the demons that stole them. But it eventually turns out that Naraku secretly ends up obtaining all of the Sacred Jewel Shards Inuyasha and his friends have acquired. But however, little does Inuyasha and his friends know that the Sacred Jewel is now one shard away from being fully assembled and is now in Naraku’s grasp.


Summary for New Inuyasha Episode #2: Kohaku's Death and Naraku's Rebirth (In Complete Chapter Form)

The story starts out with the view of Naraku’s Castle with the bright pink impenetrable barrier around it coming into closer view. After which, an image of Naraku’s hand stretched out appears with the Sacred Jewel only one shard away from being fully assembled that now glows an evil red light due to the fact that it has been corrupted by Naraku.

“Only one shard remains until the Sacred Jewel is fully assembled,” Naraku smirked, closing his fist tightly around the Shikon no Tama. “And soon I, Naraku, will be reborn as a full-blooded demon of immeasurable power!”

After Naraku said that, he then asks Kanna to come to him. Hearing this, Kanna makes her approach towards Naraku.

“Now let’s see who is in possession of the final shard,” Naraku said with a curious tone of voice while looking through Kanna’s mirror.

Kanna’s mirror shows Inuyasha and his friends who are unsuccessful with their search for the Sacred Jewel Shards. Which then, the mirror gives off a reflective light and the scene of the mirror changes to Kohaku who has decided to join Inuyasha and his team in their unsuccessful search.

“Ah, yes, Kohaku,” Naraku said with an evil voice of interest. “I reckon Sango would really enjoy the death of her little brother,” Naraku laughs and the scene of the mirror with Inuyasha and his friends comes into closer view, thus continuing the story with Inuyasha and his friends who are walking through the woods and are unsuccessful with their search for the Sacred Jewel Shards.

The story continues with Inuyasha and his friends (along with Kohaku) who are walking through the woods on a bright sunny day. But strangely, there are no signs of any demon or Sacred Jewel Shard around.

“We’ve been searching all day! And still no sign of any Sacred Jewel Shard around,” Inuyasha said with a voice of curiosity and then sniffing the air. “But no doubt about it, Naraku’s scent has definitely become stronger!”

“Perhaps Naraku has acquired more Sacred Jewel Shards and is now gaining even more power as we speak,” Miroku stated with a voice of interest and then giving a gesture of thought by slightly tilting his head downward and squeezing his chin with his thumb and index finger.

“Kagome, are you sure you haven’t sensed any shards lately,” Inuyasha asked firmly while looking over to Kagome with demanding eyes.

“No, I haven’t,” Kagome replied with a serious tone of voice while looking back at Inuyasha and then looking straight ahead with much thought. “And now that I think about it, we haven’t come across any demons either, have we, Inuyasha,” Kagome asked eagerly while looking back at Inuyasha again.

“No, you’re right Kagome,” Inuyasha astonishingly replied with a quiet tone of voice while looking back at Kagome.

“This is way too weird for me,” Shippo said with a creeped-out enthusiastic tone of voice while looking towards the ground with his eyes half closed and nodding his head left and right and then looking forward with his eyes open and then raising his fist in order to express his enthusiasm. “We usually come across demons and Sacred Jewel Shards all the time! But now, it’s as if all of the demons and Sacred Jewel Shards have all disappeared—right before our very eyes,” Shippo eagerly expressed and then resuming his creeped-out gesture by looking towards the ground and nodding his head. “If you ask me, it’s very creepy!”

“I don’t know about you, but I get the feeling that Naraku is plotting something,” Inuyasha said anxiously while moving his head in many directions as though expecting something evil to come.

“Well, whatever he’s plotting, nothing is going to harm my Kohaku,” Sango said with a protective voice and then puts her hand on Kohaku’s shoulder, looks at him and smiles which makes Kohaku look up at her with a surprised look. “No matter what happens, I solemnly swear to protect Kohaku,” Sango said with a peaceful tone of voice which continues another private conversation with Kohaku and Sango while Inuyasha and his friends are standing still and cherishing this moment. Which then, after the private conversation, Sango then holds Kohaku in her arms.

“I—I love you sister Sango,” Kohaku calmly said with his head over Sango’s shoulder with his eyes closed to express profound emotion while in Sango’s arms.

“I love you, too, Kohaku,” Sango replied with much joy with her head over Kohaku’s shoulder and then shedding tears of joy. Which then, the hugging continues for a little bit until suddenly, Inuyasha senses the presence of a demon.

“What’s wrong, Inuyasha,” Miroku asked with a concerned tone of voice who notices Inuyasha who is now in a disturbed state of mind.

“I’m sensing the presence of one of Naraku’s demons,” Inuyasha stated with a disgusted tone of voice and then looks mysteriously in a fixated position. After which, Inuyasha and his friends then prepare themselves. Which then, a demon makes its hideous appearance amongst some trees who is indeed a demon of much stature.

“I have been sent from Naraku to obtain the final shard of the Sacred Jewel,” the demon critically stated with a revolting tone of voice after suddenly knocking down some trees and then looks at Kohaku with an evil glare. “From Kohaku’s back!!!”

“No, could it be,” Miroku asked horrifically while looking up at the demon with his eyes wide open. “Has Naraku really obtained all of the Sacred Jewel Shards???”

“Yes, monk,” the demon smirked while looking back at Miroku. “And once I obtain the final shard from Kohaku’s back and give it to Naraku, his transformation into a full demon will be complete,” the demon said with much excitement and then looks back at Kohaku with a serious look. “And now, Kohaku, prepare to be slaughtered,” the demon yelled and then swipes its claws in an attempt to slay Kohaku. But fortunately, Sango holds her boomerang horizontally which blocks the demon’s attack. And while still trying to hold off the demon’s attack with her boomerang, Sango then looks back at Kohaku and tells him to run. Which then, of course, Kohaku runs. But after a few seconds of running through the narrow woods, Naraku then takes over Kohaku’s mind which makes Kohaku stand still with a blank look in his eyes.

“Do not cower,” Naraku said, speaking through Kohaku’s mind. “Run back in the face of danger and offer my servant what he wants!”

“As you wish, master Naraku,” Kohaku humbly replied, and then faces back towards the demon who Inuyasha and his friends are having a hard time battling with due to the fact that the demon is very skilled in dodging attacks. After which, Kohaku then retreats from the narrow woods and then runs blindly up towards the demon who is in a wide-open battlefield due to the fact that most of the trees have been obliterated. And while running up towards the demon, Sango then notices Kohaku who has just ran past her.

“No, Kohaku, it’s too dangerous,” Sango yelled with her hand aimed towards Kohaku as an expression.

“Are you crazy,” Inuyasha, who has been knocked down by the demon, yelled while looking up at Kohaku. “You’re going to get yourself killed,” Inuyasha informed Kohaku who then stands still right in front of the demon (who is already aware that Kohaku is under Naraku’s control).

“Don’t worry, Kohaku, I’ll save you,” Sango yelled, getting ready to attack who now realizes that Kohaku is being controlled. And while getting ready to attack, she then brings out her boomerang and then aims for the demon. But before Sango even got the chance to slay the demon with her boomerang, the demon immediately notices that Sango is about to attack. And the demon then immediately moves its claws towards Kohaku and immediately speaks to Sango saying that if she were to attack, that Kohaku would be slaughtered. Hearing this, Sango immediately ceases from attacking.

“You’re the one who’s going to get slaughtered,” Inuyasha yelled angrily to the demon while running up to Kohaku in an attempt to save him. But before Inuyasha even got the chance to slaughter the demon with his iron reaver, the demon then moves its claws even closer to Kohaku. Which then, Inuyasha (who was half way to achieving his objective) immediately stops knowing the fact that if he were to come any closer that Kohaku would be slaughtered. And because of that, Sango as well as everyone else are now aware that if they were to do anything in an attempt to save Kohaku, that Kohaku would be slaughtered. And because of that, they could do nothing but stand there and hope that Kohaku comes to his senses and runs away.

“Naraku has commanded me to offer the Sacred Jewel Shard embedded in my back as a sacrifice for his transformation,” Kohaku spoke fearlessly to the demon and then turns his back towards the demon. “So honor my master by extracting the final shard!”

“Naraku is controlling you, Kohaku,” Sango said, trying to put some sense into Kohaku. “Please, Kohaku, you must fight it off!!!”

“I don’t care how powerful Naraku has become,” Kagome encouraged with a raised fist to express her emotions. “You have more power than him,” Kagome further encouraged and then raises her voice. “You can do it, Kohaku, I know you can!!!”

“I, Kohaku, am powerless against Naraku’s control,” Kohaku said, looking straight ahead with no signs of fear, anger, love, or sadness, and then looks at Sango. “I’m sorry that it has to end this way, Sango,” Kohaku said coldly, and then looking straight ahead again. “And now……………………watch in horror as your little brother gets slaughtered right before your very eyes!”

“No, Kohaku………………DON’T,” Sango yelled, running up to Kohaku, but then stands still in horror as the demon slaughters Kohaku immediately after Sango started to run after him which results in the extraction of the Sacred Jewel Shard from his back. Which then, the Sacred Jewel Shard lands in the demon’s hand and the demon immediately vanishes into thin air. And now realizing that her little brother has just been slaughtered, Sango immediately rushes up to Kohaku and holds him in her arms and now sheds tears of sadness.

“No……………..Kohaku,” Sango said painfully and quietly while tightly holding Kohaku in her arms and shedding many tears. “Please come back to me my little brother!” After which, a demon puppet form of Naraku in his white bamboo suit appears and laughs maliciously.

“If you wish to battle me, Inuyasha, then you will come to my castle………“alone,” the demon puppet Naraku informed Inuyasha. “Unless, of course, you want your friends to be at stake!”

“How ‘bout if I just finish you off right here and NOW,” Inuyasha yelled angrily while running up to the demon puppet form of Naraku and then uses the Wind Scar the moment Inuyasha said the word ‘NOW’ which results in the demon puppet being destroyed. And while the demon puppet is being destroyed by the Wind Scar, a close-up of the demon puppet is shown which is being demolished. But immediately after the demon puppet got destroyed, the story then continues back to Naraku’s Castle with Naraku who now realizes that his demon puppet has been destroyed.

There is a view of Naraku who is smiling and is situated (sat down) near the little piece of wood with his hair tied around it which has just been sliced in half.

“I think Inuyasha got the message,” Naraku smirked, realizing that his demon puppet has been destroyed due to the fact that the little piece of wood next to him with his hair tied around it got sliced in half.

“I have extracted the final shard from Kohaku’s back just as you have commanded,” the demon said with a loyal voice who has now reappeared back at the castle with the final shard of the Sacred Jewel glistening in his hand.

“Ah, I see your mission was a success,” Naraku said with a happy tone of voice while standing up. Which then, the demon walks towards Naraku and gives him the final shard of the Sacred Jewel. After which, Naraku puts the final shard into place which results in the fully assembled Sacred Jewel at last! And once fully assembled, Naraku then uses the power of the Sacred Jewel and transforms into a giant demon.

“At long last,” Naraku said in his new incredible demon form, relishing his new incredible demonic powers. “The power I’ve always dreamed to obtain,” Naraku said with his new incredible demon voice and then looking over to Kanna and the demon with a look of detestation.

“Now that I’ve ascended to my true demon form, you are no longer of any use to me,” Naraku said with a hateful tone of voice and then slaughters Kanna and the demon. Which then, Naraku, who has now ascended to his true demon form and slaughtered his own incarnations, now awaits Inuyasha’s arrival.


<b>~END CHAPTER~</b>

[BakaYasha7583]

O_o. well...now that we're in agreeance that it isn't real...i would admit that it is a fanfiction by all definition. obviously illicted by the writing style; it is not a product of Rumiko Takahashi. it's not that bad...just the exhausting over use of the term slaughtered. i mean...you can only use it so often...and defining one death isn't slaughtering...it's murder. you slaughter a group, you kill a person (sorry, though my grammar sucks, the style of writing causes eyebrow twitching). it's constructed well enough though the emotion that sango exhibits is a little much.

[Alien Shadow Sesshomaru]

O_o. well...now that we're in agreeance that it isn't real...i would admit that it is a fanfiction by all definition. obviously illicted by the writing style; it is not a product of Rumiko Takahashi. it's not that bad...just the exhausting over use of the term slaughtered. i mean...you can only use it so often...and defining one death isn't slaughtering...it's murder. you slaughter a group, you kill a person (sorry, though my grammar sucks, the style of writing causes eyebrow twitching). it's constructed well enough though the emotion that sango exhibits is a little much.

It's obvious to me that you have read the entire chapter. Good job! And so, I would like to introduce to you the next chapter which is titled 'Inuyasha's Unaided Quest for Retribution: An Unexpected Ally Makes Her Appearance At Naraku's Castle!'

Summary for New Inuyasha Episode #3: Inuyasha's Unaided Quest for Retribution: An Unexpected Ally Makes Her Appearance At Naraku's Castle (In Complete Chapter Form)

The story continues back with Inuyasha and his friends who are now prepared to battle Naraku at his castle, especially Sango who had her little brother slaughtered. And while having Kohaku in her arms and shedding tears, Inuyasha’s friends are situated near her in an attempt to calm her down. But Inuyasha, on the other hand, is situated away from his friends and is in a distant world from his friends and is now prepared to battle Naraku all alone.

“Damn that Naraku,” Sango said furiously, releasing Kohaku from her arms, standing up firmly and creating a tight fist with her hand. “DAMN HIM!!!”

“I can’t take this anymore,” Inuyasha said quickly and strongly while looking straight ahead at a giant cloud of purple demonic aura (Naraku’s demonic aura that has undoubtedly increased when he has ascended into a full demon with the power of the Sacred Jewel) from his castle with much anger while having his back turned towards his friends. “Naraku has killed too many innocent people,” Inuyasha said with a raised fist while a front view of Inuyasha is shown who still has his back turned towards his friends. “And I’m not going to let any of you get slaughtered by Naraku—not while I’m alive,” Inuyasha stated with his fist still raised and then shakes his raised fist. “And if you think I’m going to let any of you come with me and put yourselves in danger, then you’ve got another thing coming!”

“Inuyasha, you don’t intend to battle Naraku all by yourself, do you,” Kagome immediately asked with a concerned tone of voice while a close-up side view of her face is shown who looks surprised.

“I have no other choice,” Inuyasha said calmly while lowering his fist with his back still turned while the front view of him is still shown. “It’s either that, or your lives,” Inuyasha said calmly after slightly titling his head downward. “Stay here with Kohaku,” Inuyasha firmly stated while looking over his shoulder at his friends. “I’ll defeat Naraku with my Dragon-Scaled Tetsusaiga and avenge Kohaku’s death alone,” Inuyasha said angrily while a close-up side view of his face is shown who is looking straight ahead with much anger and then takes off as fast as he can.

“Inuyasha’s taking off,” Shippo yelled with an appalled tone of voice. “Come back, Inuyasha!!!”

“As his friends, we should help,” Miroku stated with a serious tone of voice while looking straight ahead with a look of determination.

“You’re right, Miroku,” Kagome agreed while looking at Miroku with an encouraged look.

“Sango, will you be all right,” Miroku quickly asked while looking at Sango with concerned eyes.

“Not until Kohaku’s death is avenged,” Sango (who is no longer shedding tears) said with a calm, psychotic tone of voice who has a look of a dark shadow with her head tilted downward with her hair over her eyes. “Kirara,” Sango calmly said, looking over to Kirara who now approaches Sango and then transforms. “Let’s go,” Sango said with a calm, hateful tone of voice while on Kirara’s back. After which, Inuyasha’s friends then take off and pursue Inuyasha (who is way ahead of his friends). But while Inuyasha’s friends continue to pursue him, there is a mixed swarm of demons and poisonous insects coming from Naraku’s Castle that are hurtling towards Inuyasha’s friends at a remarkable speed in an attempt to hold them back. And once the giant swarm of demons and poisonous insects come into contact with Inuyasha’s friends, they then slaughter the demons and insects, especially Sango who furiously slaughters the swarm of youkai along with the poisonous insects. But as for Miroku, he was unable to use his wind tunnel because of the poisonous insects. And while Inuyasha’s friends slaughter the swarm of demons and insects, the story then continues with Inuyasha who is running as fast as he can to Naraku’s Castle to get there and destroy Naraku once and for all.

There is a side view of Inuyasha and a rapid sound of footsteps as Inuyasha is running through a forest with many trees.

“I must be getting close,” Inuyasha said with a voice of haste while a close-up side view of Inuyasha’s face is shown. “Naraku’s scent is definitely getting stronger,” Inuyasha said with a serious tone of voice. After which, Inuyasha’s perspective is shown (Inuyasha’s viewpoint [looking through Inuyasha’s eyes]). And as Inuyasha is running for a few more seconds, the story then changes to a whole new scene with Sesshomaru at his training area who is looking up towards the sky with a look of disturbance.

There is a view of Sesshomaru who is looking up towards the sky with a look of disturbance while a slight breeze is occurring that is blowing Sesshomaru's hair back including the grass on the ground. And there is then a close-up of Sesshomaru's face who looks very serious and narrows his eyes. After which, the scene changes to Rin, Jaken, and Ah-Un (who are at Sesshomaru’s training area near a lake catching fish).

Rin and Jaken are happy with no worries and are prancing about the lake trying to catch fish while Ah-Un are standing near the lake waiting for the fish to arrive.

“Yes, I caught one,” Rin yells with excitement as she catches a fish.

“All right,” Jaken yells with pride as Rin tosses the fish over to the pile of fish that is near Ah-Un. But after Rin tossed the fish to the pile, Sesshomaru appears to Rin, Jaken, and Ah-Un. Seeing this, Rin and Jaken get out of the lake and greet Sesshomaru.

“Hey, it’s Sesshomaru,” Rin yells with excitement while running out of the lake which makes Jaken surprised who also runs out of the lake. “Hi, Sesshomaru,” Rin yells with a happy tone of voice while waving her hand at Sesshomaru with Jaken near her who has just caught up with her.

“Jaken,” Sesshomaru says with a serious look on his face while getting Jaken’s attention with a tone of voice that is calm and serious.

“Yes, me lord,” Jaken humbly replies while bowing down.

“The scent of my greatest nemesis has grown much stronger,” Sesshomaru stated while a close-up of his face is shown who looks very serious with narrowed eyes.

“You mean Naraku,” Jaken asks with a surprised tone of voice while trembling.

“I suspect Inuyasha and his friends might be in danger,” Sesshomaru states strongly with a look of apprehension. “And I expect you, Jaken, to take good care of Rin while I’m gone!”

“You can count on me my lord,” Jaken said with a concerned tone of voice while looking at Sesshomaru who looks at Jaken with an honored look and then immediately takes off with a burst of speed.

“You’re leaving,” Rin asks loudly with much concern who looks surprised.

“Don’t worry Rin, I’m sure Sesshomaru would be able to defeat Naraku considering all of the training he’s been undergoing,” Jaken says calmly to Rin with a voice of confidence.

“I sure hope you’re right, master Jaken,” Rin says with a worried tone of voice. “Please be all right, Sesshomaru,” Rin thinks to herself while a close-up of Rin is shown who has a look of worry on her face. And immediately after this close-up of Rin, the scene changes to Sesshomaru who is indeed, running very fast in an attempt to get to Naraku and defeat him and to protect Inuyasha and his friends incase if they were to get harmed.

Sesshomaru’s perspective is shown and there is an extremely rapid sound of footsteps (MUCH more rapid than the sound of Inuyasha’s footsteps) as Sesshomaru is also running through a forest (a much bigger forest that has much more trees than the forest Inuyasha was running through). And while Sesshomaru is running extremely fast through this forest, many trees are shown that are rapidly being dodged by Sesshomaru. (NOTE: because Sesshomaru has been undergoing intense training, he has become much more faster than before and also has the ability to dodge practically everything!)

“This scent I’m picking up is definitely Naraku’s,” Sesshomaru thinks to himself with a voice of certainty while his perspective is shown. “But I anticipate that Inuyasha will manage this battle with the help of his friends alone until my arrival,” Sesshomaru thought with a voice of optimism while a close-up side view of his face is shown who has narrowed eyes. And immediately after this close-up side view of Sesshomaru’s face, the story then continues back with Inuyasha who is now approaching Naraku’s Castle.

There is a view of Naraku’s Castle with a lot of purple demonic aura just up ahead while Inuyasha is running up to it and is determined to get there and defeat Naraku once and for all.

“I see it—Naraku’s Castle,” Inuyasha thought to himself with a voice of determination while eagerly running up to Naraku’s Castle. “Naraku’s barrier—it’s disappeared,” Inuyasha thought with a surprised tone of voice, noticing that there is no barrier around Naraku’s Castle. “I’m coming for you Naraku,” Inuyasha yelled while approaching Naraku’s Castle. But as Inuyasha continues to approach Naraku’s Castle, he then immediately stops, seeing that Kikyo is standing near Naraku’s Castle looking straight ahead.

“It’s Kikyo,” Inuyasha said quietly with a voice of astonishment and immediately stops and then slowly walks up to her.

“The time has finally come, Inuyasha, for me to purify the Sacred Jewel along with Naraku’s body,” Kikyo said while looking straight ahead with Inuyasha standing next to her who looks at Kikyo with a look of astonishment.

~END CHAPTER~

[BakaYasha7583]

hmm. a couple gramatical errors (rin would never address Sesshoumaru without an honoriffic yet use one with jaken. it's always been (in english) Lord Sesshoumaru or in japanese, Sesshoumaru-sama. never just sesshoumaru, she'd have her head taken off). also, you keep stating that the brothers are 'true' brothers yet i really still don't grasp the concept. there are a lot of holes, no offense, between plot and point and a lot of:

"oh Jane, look up to the sky"
"what is it Tim"
"jane, i think it is an airplane"
"why Tim, i do believe you're right".

i really mean no offense by that but you really need to put a little bit harder emotion into this and also find yourself a fan fiction site to post it on. i would suggest http://www.mediaminer.org or http://www.fanfiction.net i started a fanfiction thread a while back but...well...no one had anythign to say. oh well.

the story is decent but like i said, a lot of holes, more needed description instead of snippets of information and a wider...err...internalization of plot. look for me on either of the two listed sites above. i go by the penn fallenangel7583

[Alien Shadow Sesshomaru]

hmm. a couple gramatical errors (rin would never address Sesshoumaru without an honoriffic yet use one with jaken. it's always been (in english) Lord Sesshoumaru or in japanese, Sesshoumaru-sama. never just sesshoumaru, she'd have her head taken off). also, you keep stating that the brothers are 'true' brothers yet i really still don't grasp the concept. there are a lot of holes, no offense, between plot and point and a lot of:

"oh Jane, look up to the sky"
"what is it Tim"
"jane, i think it is an airplane"
"why Tim, i do believe you're right".

Could you tell me of these holes between the plot and the point? Also, how is it that there is not enough emotion if there is description after the character speaks such as:

“Damn that Naraku,” Sango said furiously, releasing Kohaku from her arms, standing up firmly and creating a tight fist with her hand. “DAMN HIM!!!" Or:

“The scent of my greatest nemesis has grown much stronger,” Sesshomaru stated while a close-up of his face is shown who looks very serious with narrowed eyes.

But anyway, here's chapter 3 which is titled 'Destination of Annihilation: Showdown! Inuyasha vs. Naraku.' But just to let you know, the last remaining 2 chapters after this chapter are not in complete chapter form--they are only in episode summary form. But I will try to obtain the complete chapter form version of these last 2 remaining chapters!

Summary for New Inuyasha Episode #4: Destination of Annihilation: Showdown! Inuyasha vs. Naraku (In Complete Chapter Form)

The story continues with Inuyasha and Kikyo standing next to each other who are situated near Naraku’s Castle while Inuyasha continues to look at Kikyo with a look of astonishment.

“And you’re willing to do this, even if it means getting slain by Naraku,” Inuyasha asks quietly while looking at Kikyo with much concern.

“I’m afraid I have no other choice—it’s the only way of getting rid of Naraku for good,” Kikyo stated while looking at Inuyasha. “Even though I suspect that my power alone as a divine priestess will not be enough,” Kikyo said with a tragic look with her head down with her eyes closed.

“It’s not the only way,” Inuyasha stated strongly and then looks straight ahead. “I have my Dragon-Scaled Tetsusaiga—I can use it to destroy Naraku and take out the Sacred Jewel from his remains, and that way, you won’t have to worry about Naraku harming you—not as long as I’m here!”

“If you truly believe this, then let’s enter Naraku’s Castle…………………….together,” Kikyo stated while strongly looking at Inuyasha who looks back at Kikyo with a surprised look. “That way, we’ll battle Naraku together as one,” Kikyo suggested while still looking at Inuyasha who now looks at Kikyo with strong approval while nodding his head in agreement to Kikyo’s suggestion. After which, Inuyasha and Kikyo enter Naraku’s Castle together to battle Naraku as one and to defeat Naraku once and for all.

As Inuyasha and Kikyo are walking through the battlefield (Naraku’s Castle), there are many clouds of purple demonic aura. But while Inuyasha and Kikyo continue walking through Naraku’s Castle, they then stop, hearing Naraku speaking who is hidden amongst the thick clouds of purple demonic aura.

“Figured you’d come alone, Inuyasha,” Naraku said with his new demonic voice who his hidden. “And I see you brought Kikyo with you—the one who delivered the finishing blow to Mourymouaru a long time ago and destroyed my relocated heart, no less!”

“Show yourself, Naraku,” Inuyasha yells while frantically looking in many directions. “Come out and fight!”

“Relax, Inuyasha, I’m not going anywhere,” Naraku calmly said who has now made his hideous appearance out from the clouds of purple demonic aura. “And neither are you,” Naraku said with an evil tone of voice while narrowing his eyes.

“What do you mean by that,” Inuyasha eagerly asks while looking at Naraku with a curious look.

“Look around you,” Naraku said with a voice of excitement while an outside view of Naraku’s Castle is shown with the bright pink impenetrable barrier around it which has been reestablished. “Behold, I have reestablished my barrier,” Naraku said proudly. “And so, there is no escaping for you nor Kikyo,” Naraku said maliciously while the outside view of Naraku’s Castle with the bright pink impenetrable barrier around it is still shown. “And I’m expecting that your friends will be on their way here very soon to help you,” Naraku stated while a front view of him is shown. “But you see, they won’t be able to help you because they will be unable to gain entrance to this castle,” Naraku explained while a close-up side view of his face is shown. After which, Inuyasha then looks at Naraku angrily, but then notices Kikyo who has become weary.

“Kikyo,” Inuyasha said vigorously with much concern while quickly approaching Kikyo, noticing that Kikyo has become weary.

“Oh, and did I mention,” Naraku said maliciously with an evil look while a front view of him is shown. “The demonic aura in this castle is very powerful—even a half breed such as yourself will be unable to maintain strength in these fumes,” Naraku said with an evil smirk. “And as for Kikyo, she has already become weakened by the demonic aura in this castle,” Naraku said while a view of Kikyo is shown who is face down on the ground, unconscious, with her soul collectors behind her which are colliding against Naraku’s barrier, unable to gain entrance to the castle. “But no need to worry,” Naraku says while a close-up of him is shown who then points behind him. “Behold………………...“my” soul collectors,” Naraku says while pointing behind him. After which, there is some black soul collectors that are now approaching Naraku.

“What,” Inuyasha astonishingly replies with a quiet tone of voice noticing that there are black soul collectors near Naraku. “Black……………soul collectors???”

“That’s right, Inuyasha. But these are no ordinary soul collectors,” Naraku says with an interested look. “Like Kikyo’s soul collectors, these soul collectors obey my every command and were drawn to my evil and have chosen to be at my side,” Naraku says while the front view of him is still shown with the black soul collectors near him. “And now, abominable black soul collectors, I ask of you, acquire the tainted souls in this castle and give them to Kikyo,” Naraku says with evil excitement. After which there is a view of the black soul collectors which are now acquiring red souls from the ground and giving them to Kikyo who now awakens, but only to be tormented. And seeing that Kikyo has awakened, but is tormented by corrupted souls, Inuyasha gets a look on his face that is both curiosity and horrification.

“What’s wrong Inuyasha, you look surprised,” Naraku asks with an evil smile. “You should be thanking me--for allowing Kikyo to be sustained with tarnished souls of prolonged suffering,” Naraku says with a malicious smirk while looking at Inuyasha who is now looking at Naraku furiously. “You see, Inuyasha, the demonic aura in this castle which has remained here for some time now is very potent—seeping into the ground and tainting the souls of the dead below,” Naraku said while a close-up side view of his face is shown. After which, Inuyasha is shown who looks appalled with Kikyo next to him who is down on her knees while enduring the prolonged suffering that her soul collectors are giving her. “And therefore, all of the souls within this castle are corrupted by my demonic aura and only induce pain and suffering upon Kikyo,” Naraku stated while a close-up side view of his face is shown and then a close-up of Kikyo who is being sustained with souls of torment.

“No………………..please,” Kikyo begs the black soul collectors which continue to give her red souls while Inuyasha watches her with horrification. “STOP!”

“So you see now,” Naraku said with an evil grin while a close-up side view of his face is shown again. “Instead of allowing Kikyo to rest in peace without the souls of the dead, I have erected the barrier around this castle just in time these abominable black soul collectors were gathered here so that she would suffer instead!” After which, there is a close-up side view of Inuyasha’s face who look horrified, and then a close-up side view of Naraku’s face again who continues his evil explanation. “And not only that, Inuyasha,” Naraku says, continuing his evil explanation. “Ever since I reestablished this castle, I have purposely led numerous amounts of mortals and demons to this very castle so that they would be slaughtered by my hands in order for their souls to remain here to be corrupted by my demonic aura,” Naraku explained as disturbing stationary images are shown (flashbacks) of mortals and demons arriving at Naraku’s recreated castle while being slaughtered by Naraku (which includes an image of Koga). “And the reason why I did it, is for this very moment—to see Kikyo suffer right before your own pathetic eyes,” Naraku said hatefully while a close-up side view of his face is shown yet again.

“That’s it, Naraku,” Inuyasha says with a calm, psychotic tone of voice while having his head tilted downward. “I have had enough of your sick tricks and evil schemes,” Inuyasha yells while slaughtering the black soul collectors with his iron reaver while in mid-air and lands back down on the ground with his arm aimed towards the air over his face which indicates that Inuyasha has slaughtered the black soul collectors with his iron reaver. And while Inuyasha is in this position, the corrupted souls that the black soul collectors were acquiring return to the ground and the demolished black soul collectors fall to the ground and vanquish.

“So, I see you’ve made the critical decision of ending Kikyo’s misery,” Naraku says while a front view of Inuyasha is shown who is still in the same position.

“Thank you………….Inu………..yasha,” Kikyo says with much gratitude and then falls face down on the ground and becomes unconscious.

“I must say, Inuyasha, this is much unlike you to end the suffering of others without any moment of hesitation,” Naraku says while a close-up side view of his face is shown. “But it’s to be expected, considering how much you’ve changed over time and become deeply compassionate for others,” Naraku says with an evil smile while the close-up side view of his face is still shown. After which, a close-up of Inuyasha is shown who now draws his Tetsusaiga with a psychotic look with his head titled downward with his hair over his eyes which projects a shadow on his forehead.

“Naraku,” Inuyasha says with a calm, psychotic tone of voice with his head still tilted downward and then immediately looks straight ahead which results in the projected shadow on his forehead disappearing. “I’m going to make you pay for what you did to Kohaku and for what you did to Kikyo,” Inuyasha says with a calm, psychotic tone of voice while looking straight ahead at Naraku with a look of profound hatred. “So prepare yourself, Naraku,” Inuyasha yells while running up to Naraku. And while Inuyasha is running up to Naraku, there is a front view of Naraku shown straight ahead who has an evil smirk on his face. After which, there is a view of Inuyasha shown who is using the Wind Scar with his Dragon-Scaled Tetsusaiga which not only results in wind being unleashed, but also diamond spears (the Kongousouha) which hits Naraku head on with great impact. But after the wind and diamond spears were cleared away, Naraku is shown who has an evil grin on his face who is undamaged.

“You underestimate my power, Inuyasha” Naraku says with an evil grin while the dust around him is clearing away.

“Damn, not a single scratch,” Inuyasha thinks to himself while a close-up of him is shown who looks shocked. “If my Kongousouha didn’t work, then what will,” Inuyasha asks himself with a look of apprehension. But after Inuyasha asked himself this question, there is an outside view of Naraku’s Castle with Inuyasha’s friends who are now arriving at the castle.

There is an aerial view of Naraku’s Castle straight ahead with the bright pink impenetrable barrier around it while a swooshing sound is made by Kirara’s feet.

“I see them! Inuyasha and Naraku—inside the barrier,” Kagome says with much enthusiasm while pointing straight ahead.

“Let’s get a closer look,” Miroku says.

“Kirara,” Sango says to Kirara who now descends towards the ground. And once Kirara landed, Miroku, Sango, Shippo, and Kagome get off of Kirara’s back and run up towards the barrier around Naraku’s Castle.

“Look, it’s Kikyo’s soul collectors,” Kagome says while pointing at them which are still colliding against Naraku’s barrier, unable to gain entrance.

“Oh, no, Kikyo—she’s…………………,” Miroku says with a look of horrification while looking at Kikyo who is face down on the ground.

“Inuyasha, you must destroy Naraku quickly because Kikyo’s life is at stake,” Kagome yells while a close-up front view of Inuyasha is shown who is looking over his shoulder back at his friends who are situated near the barrier. (NOTE: Inuyasha and his friends are already aware that the barrier around Naraku’s Castle is impenetrable and will only disappear if Naraku is defeated. How they know this is because in my introductory information, it says that even with the Dragon-Scaled Tetsusaiga, the Red Tetsusaiga, and the Kongousouha, Inuyasha is no match for this barrier which obviously means that Inuyasha has tried many times to slice through the barrier, but was no match for the barrier).

“Pity your friends are of no use to you,” Naraku says while the close-up front view of Inuyasha is still shown.

“Let’s just get this over with,” Inuyasha says while looking back at Naraku. And after Inuyasha said this, he then continues to battle Naraku. And so, the final battle between Inuyasha and Naraku begins!

In the final battle between Inuyasha and Naraku, Inuyasha was trying with all his might to destroy Naraku. But as he continued to battle Naraku, Inuyasha becomes weaker and weaker because of the demonic aura in the castle and was also unable to render a single scratch on Naraku. But sadly, after a little while of battling with Naraku, Naraku then ends the battle by slaughtering Inuyasha which results in his Tetsusaiga flying out of his grasp and landing with its tip stuck in the ground.

“No, Inuyasha,” Kagome yells while shedding tears while looking at Inuyasha who is face down on the ground who is bloodied-up.

“I don’t believe it, Inuyasha……………….he’s been slaughtered by Naraku,” Miroku says with a quiet tone of voice with a look of horrification with his eyes wide open. But after Miroku said that, there is a view of Naraku who is looking at Inuyasha’s friends with an evil look which results in the barrier around his castle disappearing. Realizing this, Inuyasha’s friends immediately run up to Inuyasha only to be blocked by Naraku’s evil presence.

“You fools! And just where do you think you’re going,” Naraku asks Inuyasha’s friends who are now blocked by Naraku’s evil presence. Realizing this, Inuyasha’s friends immediately stand still in horror. “Are you witnessing this, Inuyasha? Because I’m about to slaughter your helpless friends,” Naraku asks Inuyasha while looking at Inuyasha who is face down on the ground. “Oh, yeah, I almost forgot—I have completely sapped every ounce of breath from you,” Naraku smirks while looking back at Inuyasha’s friends. “And now that I’ve slaughtered you, I shall now slaughter your helpless friends who could do nothing but watch in horror as I annihilated your very existence in this living world,” Naraku says eagerly and gets ready to slaughter Inuyasha’s friends. But before Naraku got the chance to slaughter Inuyasha’s friends, there is a familiar voice that immediately gets Naraku’s attention.

“Leave them out of this, Naraku,” a voice says while a close-up of Naraku’s face is shown who is about to slaughter Inuyasha’s friends, but immediately takes his attention off of Inuyasha’s friends.

“That voice,” Naraku says while a close-up of Naraku’s face is shown who looks very surprised and immediately takes his attention off of Inuyasha’s friends. After which, there is a view of nothing but empty space and thick clouds of purple demonic aura. But after a few seconds, a black figure appears amongst the thick clouds of purple demonic aura which is making its way into the battlefield. And as this black figure is making its way into the battlefield, this black figure appears as Sesshomaru who is now stepping into the battlefield and looks very serious.

“Your battle is with me now,” Sesshomaru says while a close-up of him is shown who is now standing still with a look of strong determination.

~END CHAPTER~

[La Tua Cantante]

Why.. type so much?!?! Why... why!

[BakaYasha7583]

all right, to touch on my first point of emotion being pushed through words and actions; writing style 101.

Example: “Thank you………….Inu………..yasha,” Kikyo says with much gratitude and then falls face down on the ground and becomes unconscious.


first, grammar. when using an ellipse in a sentence, you only want to stagger a word three (...) points, otherwise it becomes a new sentence with a ton of periods. but grammar isn't my cup of tea.

"Kikyo says with much gratitude and then falls face down on the ground and becomes unconscious."

-i'll digress;
says...a very blatant term when using to refer to quotations. if she is having a hard time breathing, she simply would not be saying, ne? maybe coughed...maybe gasped...maybe whispered...not 'says'. also, that's present tense. granted, the whole story is in present tense but i'll say, it makes for harder reading. you're dictating the story as if seen on a television (and yes, before you get all antsy, i know that is what you're trying to do). BUT...as decried, we all know this isn't the show.

when you are talking about close ups, you NEVER want to describe a camera angle.

IE- " Naraku says while a close-up side view of his face is shown."

this really can make a story tedious. maybe something like, "...Naraku sneered, the moonlight casting a nearly malicious profile of the demon's face against the deserted castle courtyard". i know you're throwing this out for us to read...but like i said...it ain't the show, it ain't tv...

...and i'm still waiting for the link to this site where your stuff is coming from, though i know i will never see it.

[La Tua Cantante]

Damn.. baka kicks ass at writing.

[BakaYasha7583]

i'm just trying to help...

[La Tua Cantante]

You still kicked ass