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Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Mar 30, 2006 6:11am
by Zeromancer's Angel
Every year i come to the cemetery
our journals of love,i do carry
Three years have passed since my lovers death
With his own, he took my breath
Shadows around me move on their own
I see a face made of sacred stone
My darling angel, where are you now
To live this life, I don't know how
Staring at me this jilted moon
Who never had his, over which to swoon
six centuries shared, has turned into six feet
the wholeness once felt is now incomplete
i hang my made and weep at our separation
the full experience of what is now desperation
As i hang my head, I don't know why
But i feel eyes watching me as i cry
When will the season of winter pass from my heart
And i know, it is when we're no longer apart.....

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Mar 30, 2006 6:12am
by Zeromancer's Angel
this is my best one

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Mar 30, 2006 7:16am
by Alexiel Strife
I absolute love it.. its so dark but the true meaning of love shines through.
:x I'm a little jelous of your writing.

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Mar 30, 2006 1:30pm
by Zeromancer's Angel
no need to be jealous...have fun written your own...write from your heart friend

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Mar 31, 2006 2:18pm
by AngelBlaze
=D> Awsome poem! It's very good. =D>

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Apr 01, 2006 11:13pm
by Raoul Duke
Hey! I think this 30 year old vampire-obsessed poet plagiarised your poem.

http://www.vampirerave.com/profiles2.ph ... rkness1977

Look right down at the bottom of his site.

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Apr 01, 2006 11:19pm
by Raoul Duke
I contacted the guy. You talentless scumbag. Go slit your wrists in the bath-tub and stop trying to be someone you're not.

Re: Lover's Death: a poem

Posted: Apr 02, 2006 7:16am
by OniKira
Shame on you. I'm locking this topic.