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My song :)

Posted: Oct 28, 2006 7:47am
by josh
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkOoIl41Ono

Criticism welcome, hope u like it :)

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Re: My song :)

Posted: Oct 28, 2006 10:45pm
by Yellowsakura
uh.....ok....

Re: My song :)

Posted: Oct 29, 2006 1:47am
by josh
f u. go to hell :x

nah im just sad that u didn't like it :(

Re: My song :)

Posted: Oct 29, 2006 1:10am
by Yellowsakura
i did like it actually

Re: My song :)

Posted: Oct 29, 2006 9:03am
by OniKira
u should post a whole song, not just 20 seconds of it!

Post more of it! I wanna hear the rest!

Re: My song :)

Posted: Oct 29, 2006 5:24pm
by josh
That was the whole song lol :)

Im working on a more complex original now lol, i'll show u that if I ever record it(i probably will record it)

I haven't had singing lessons..i want them :o

glad u liked it Yellowsakura :)

Re: My song :)

Posted: Nov 03, 2006 12:15pm
by Hey
I can't make out the last part, specially if they have what? (and I'm interested in this because I want to see if you and I favour the same thing in a playground)

Excellent! I'd totally sign you up.

Project ideas:
- A duet with your brother
- An Aaron theme song
Example:
Aaron! du dun dun dun, he's the go-to guuuuy. He'll make everything alriiiiiight, and won't ask you whyyyyyyy, you're wearing a tiiiiie. Aaron! He eats his veggieeeees! He'll travel the world, far and wide, to understand the reason why, He's got such powers insiiiiiide!

--guitar solo, rock out--

A-A-R-O-N, No one calls him Ben, cause that's not his name. He has great love inside, to give and no, not hide. Oh baby baby babai. He's got love inside.
Mmmhmm! Uuh! Yeah! Inside-uh!

--end softly with piano--





*the first part kinda sounds like Pokemon's theme song. How unoriginal. Whenever I hear "theme song" I automatically think, Pokemon. Or... a team of asian-lispers. "Team Sung", dig it?


Anyway, you get the idea. And if not, well I tried... Wait, I'll be very angry if you didn't! because that! up there! took skill! And if you didn't, I'd like my skill back.

Re: My song :)

Posted: Nov 04, 2006 11:18pm
by Raoul Duke
John Johnson wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkOoIl41Ono

Criticism welcome, hope u like it :)

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
I'm glad that I only have to go to MESC involuntarily twice more in my entire life. The sandpit sucks. Its...well, nonexistent.

My criticism is this: That chord progression and melody line, and the lyrics, were clearly constructed in an order designed to intentionally be really stupid and not serious. So there.


Post up something cooler.

Re: My song :)

Posted: Nov 05, 2006 4:01am
by josh
Anner I say 'especially if they have a sandpit' But i like swings and slides a lot too. As for your project ideas, i'll consider them :)

Aristolle at our school there isn't exactly a sandpit, but there is a long jump thing which has a pit of sand at the end. Near the cricket nets where the smoker boys hang :)
my songs about myself and playgrounds not school ..

hi :)

Re: My song :)

Posted: Nov 05, 2006 9:04am
by Duelist of the Twilight
like the guitar. nice song so far.

Re: My song :)

Posted: Nov 15, 2006 12:32am
by josh
thanks :)

Re: My song :)

Posted: Nov 16, 2006 7:36pm
by Duelist of the Twilight
You're welcome ^_^