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Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 11:30am
by Pyro Psycho
Meh........bullshite son.

Something I wrote kinda like a story but eh.
Inspired by Pink Floyd: The trial

The dark room lights up. There is someone seen sitting down next to a large man with a white beard, as if somehow he looked ancient and mysterious. He is cloaked with a white robe along with his eyes as pure white snow, as if he can see into your soul and your fears. Someone else is seen standing before the cloaked large man. She looks as if it is a shadow. Lights can be seen hitting her at some places so you can catch a quick glimpse at her lips moving. The figure sitting next to the judge is motionless, as if it had no life or feelings whatsoever.
The lady presented in front of the large man speaks.


Jane: Anybody out there?

Jane: ......hear me now?

Jane: Excuse me for my rudeness, your honor but.........

Jane: .......can I speak for myself now?

Judge: Go ahead, I will allow this.

She fixes her glasses.
Jane: Thank you......now how can I imply all of what I am going to say.
Why do you do this my lady? How can you possibly allow this?........

Girl: ................

Jane: For if they hurt you why would you allow this tyranny to continue?

Girl: ................

She yells,
Jane: Please listen to me, don't do this to yourself.......stop it. [censored], why do you allow this damnit. Speak damnit!

Girl: .................

Jane: Don't you see the pain you have seen? From this impudent creature? Is there anybody in there?

Girl: ..................

Jane: Can you hear me anymore? Hello?

Girl: ....................

Jane: ............no more questions, your honor.

Judge: What say you, girl?

She is now gone.

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 2:03pm
by Biki
o.o i must admit i got lotsa lost reading this. o.o cant even say at which point even. >.> i guess between the intro thing and the speaking. >.>

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 2:22pm
by Hardcore
Wow. O.o me likes

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 2:33pm
by kukutaru_ookami
I get it! ...I think ^^ niiice just creepy and vague enough to draw my attention

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 2:55pm
by Jade_Steel_Hawk
Very eerie. It probably helps to know the song though. :heh:

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 3:30pm
by Biki
........................song?o.o

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 12, 2008 4:06pm
by Jade_Steel_Hawk
Pyro Psycho wrote: Inspired by Pink Floyd: The trial

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 13, 2008 6:29am
by Biki
i disregarded that part all together. XD! never heard the song tho. >.>

Re: Please hear me.

Posted: Feb 14, 2008 12:39am
by Pyro Psycho
Sorry if it was hard to understand but if you saw it through my perspective I guess you would understand a whole lot ^^