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Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 15, 2008 8:07pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
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Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 16, 2008 1:50am
by scorpionwarrior
WOW, Excellent detail. It's great, you seem to have a talent that makes people want to read all of it.
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 16, 2008 11:11am
by Aoi Sakuraba
thanks Mat
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 16, 2008 11:28am
by Symos
Again nicely done.
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 16, 2008 11:33am
by Kaoru Hanabishi
scorpionwarrior wrote:WOW, Excellent detail. It's great, you seem to have a talent that makes people want to read all of it.
ypu aoi chan is really good with writting, is so good and has so much realism in it that it makes you feel you sitting there at the side watching... (wishes) She's really talented in writting, and we should all encourage her to write more

Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 16, 2008 12:38pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
Thanks for the compliments, but I really don't think I'm very good at this
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 19, 2008 6:36am
by The Brown-Eyed Boy
how old are you???....im jealous of your talent. you should find someone to sponser you or something........i so want your talent............i support you 100%
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 19, 2008 12:58pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
I'm 21, and I doubt anyone would sponsor like this
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 19, 2008 2:49pm
by Pennyroyal Tea
Not bad, I liked it better than the first one.
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 19, 2008 5:46pm
by Aoi Sakuraba
Thanks Andre

Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 20, 2008 7:16am
by The Brown-Eyed Boy
if you keep getting better, someone will like your talent. Then you can end up similar to Shigure from Fruits Basket.......just dont treat your editor the same.
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 25, 2008 7:18pm
by Coin~operated Boy<3
ok im gay and i liked it! very cute and romantic. your talents could take you far if you aplied them corectly.
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 26, 2008 3:09am
by Aoi Sakuraba
thanks Coin that means alot to me to have a compliment from you (since you don't like girls it makes me feel good that you liked it)
Re: Another story for those who enjoyed the first
Posted: Feb 27, 2008 12:46am
by scorpionwarrior
Aoi Sakuraba wrote:I'm 21, and I doubt anyone would sponsor like this
Don't doubt the possible
