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Bittersweet Comic

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Yeah, it's a fan made comic by me I've been working on. Anyone is welcome to read, keep up, and comment on it. Oh yes ... all characters are made by me ... except Adell. He's from Disgaea 2, so I don't claim him :B Huuurm enjoy!
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Main cast:

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Name: Ruby Copt
Age: 17
Birthday: December 21
Likes: Fashion, dresses, makeup, cute boys, and rollerskating
Dislikes: Perverts, assholes, homework, math, and her brother, Vinny
Quote: "[censored] off!"
Biography:
Ruby is the oldest out of the four fire demons, meaning after her mother's rule as a fire demon goddess, she is next in line. She is a very rude person and very straightforward but forgiving. She takes no crap from anybody; confrontations with her are usually followed by an argument or fight and, if she's not in the mood to get physically defensive, rude comments. This is due to her anger issues, caused by Jessica's side of the family. Ruby can be defined as a "dumb bimbo", always asking questions and giving the most obvious answers. She's very slow and lacks in intelligence. Usually her breasts find a way to get her an A on a test because of many male students' wandering eyes. Her speed and strength is very top notch, for it is needed in her case of being a demon. She's not very outstanding in life. She just drifts in and out.

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Name: Vincent (Vinny) Copt
Age: 17
Birthday: December 21
Likes: Boxing, fighting, honor, loyalty, and cats
Dislikes: Traitors, taking advantage of others, girls, weapons, and bugs
Quote: "Yeah, whatever..."
Biography:
Vincent is very strong and honorable, just like his father. His only path in life is to fight, and he strives to be a worldwide champion boxer. Vinny has a no-care attitude. He is quick to anger, but only with his sister. He tends to be more calm around others. He acts very tough but also has a soft spot for cats and fluffy animals, which he hides very well. He has a cat named Boots and refers to her as his "little princess." Vinny despises all insects. He even shudders to the idea of being in the presence of one, to the point where he will freeze up and shut in. In his school life, he usually minds his own business. He hates confrontations with other people so he avoids it as much as possible, but when he is faced with a real persistent [censored], like somebody who takes advantage of a weaker individual, he refuses to stay quiet. He truly finds women to be annoying since the only girls he has come across are attracted to him. The challenges he faces everyday with his only sister also add to his aggravation towards the female population.

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Name: Richard (Ritchie) Copt
Age: 16
Birthday: February 26
Likes: Anime, manga, music, Freddie, and his bookbag
Dislikes: Nothing
Quote: " *nods* "
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Richard has a quiet and calm nature that is extremely rare because of the family's lifestyle of anger issues and loudness. In the family, he's usually the sign of relief and understanding. He is an extreme anime otaku. He loves to read and collect many rare finds consisting of anime action figures, plushies, DVD's, manga, etc. It takes him away from the many frustrations his family sometimes brings him, though he hides it very well. He is in his own way very perverted, but no one knows this except him and his best friend, Danny. Ritchie absolutely loves taking care of his younger brother, Freddie. He will do anything to make his brother smile, and he will also put in the most effort to talk to him everyday or his day won't be complete. He is extremely quiet but not at all shy. He usually communicates with a nod, a smile, and a whisper.

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Name: Fredrick (Freddie) Copt
Age: 16
Birthday: February 26
Likes: Himself, Ritchie, fashion, dancing, football players, cute boys, Lady Gaga, and his nails
Dislikes: People who talk back to him, anime, fashion disasters, Vinny and Ruby, and being called fat
Quote: "Like, oh my god, listen to me!"
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Fredrick takes up a lot after his mom but four times worse. He is a bitchy instigator and will stop at nothing to make his own family fight against one another; he sees it as a game for his amusement. He always gets at anyone who tells him what he doesn't want to hear or tells him otherwise. He's a walking time bomb. Freddie constantly finds a way to bring the attention to him or else there will be problems. He is basically an attention whore. He prefers the company of girls because they usually tell him what he wants to hear and relates to them a lot. Freddie always puts himself ahead of others, but when it comes to Ritchie, he forgets a bit about himself to give his brother a shoulder to lean on.
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Story before the comic.
Long ago, there was a fire demon by the name of Jessica. In secret, she was actually a fire demon goddess. She wandered the land of the makai, keeping things underway and in check; she never failed her priorities as the authority figure that she was. The people of her land were very confident of her abilities and could never find any faults in her way of ruling. Jessica, as strong and independent as she was, had a longing for an adversary worthy of her wide array of fighting abilities. For this reason, she arranged a tournament filled with the strongest warriors to test her abilities. On went the matches. One by one, all of them went down by her very own hands. Some of them even had the misfortune of losing their life; it was a blood thirsty competition. One man stood among the rest of them. He challenged her in a most honorable way. He wanted to bring his skills to the test as well as she did. The fight went on until there was one victor. He had won and finally put the end to her undying satisfaction for a fair match. But after this, she still wasn't satisfied. What was it she was feeling a need for? Is it love? She went on a journey to find the man she once fell to ... a long and frustrating journey. From this day forward, her people in the makai never heard from her again. She was nowhere to be found. What could have happened to her? Nobody knew ...
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- Pages and covers

Page 1
Page 2
Cover Art
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"Hur" XD

Nice presentation and characters. I hope Adell's a regular and isnt just for cameo. There's even a fruitcake character! But I'm liking Vinny my boy, for obvious reasons =]

Great job.
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Ace wrote:"Hur" XD

Nice presentation and characters. I hope Adell's a regular and isnt just for cameo. There's even a fruitcake character! But I'm liking Vinny my boy, for obvious reasons =]

Great job.
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Lulz, yeah. I add my own humor in it. I'm such a bad ass /shot

Adell will be a regular when they need some type of advice. Most likely will be most ridiculous advice but for certain, he'll be there when they get home xD

Yes, Vinny takes up after daddy! :P
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I dig it! Are you going to color the characters? 0=
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hey little girl wrote:I dig it! Are you going to color the characters? 0=
I'll probably just colour the covers. I already have one coming up after I get another page done <3 I might have to colour a page though, just cuz CX

Thanks Mai <3 *hugs*
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rofl moar.
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Updated <3
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Grell wrote:rofl moar.
Seconded.
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Will do! I'll have another one up tomorrow <3
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I think I love you.
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Thanks Grell xD
I have another one up for today! The other one might take a bit longer since I work tomorrow and the rest of the week.
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wow... envy mai-me-me and ace... its been a loooooong time. :D
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Coin~operated Boy<3 wrote:wow... envy mai-me-me and ace... its been a loooooong time. :D
Lol yeeeeeeah. It has been no?
Anyways, I have yet another one up! <3
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Coin~operated Boy<3 wrote:wow... envy mai-me-me and ace... its been a loooooong time. :D
=P


Oh yus. moar <3
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I loves your comic, darlin. x3
Keep it up, babeh! <3
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