Demons and Dreams

[Grell]

I FINALLY started getting stuff uploaded onto my DA account, and I've started a new set of art called Demons and Dreams. I only have the initial sketches up now, but the colored copies will follow.

Sketch one: http://zemyxgrl.deviantart.com/art/Dyin ... -149088152

Sketch two: http://zemyxgrl.deviantart.com/art/I-m- ... -149091406

I don't have much art up aside from those, but I have poetry which I'll take any criticism for here also.

[Hardcore]

The first one is the better of the two, IMO.
But they're both pretty good.

[Grell]

Thanks. lol everyone seems to like that one more. :S

Anything that seems like it needs a major change? I'm going to (hopefully) have some colored prints up within the next week.

[Hardcore]

Well, feel free to not take me seriously, because I'm no artist. I draw stick figures still, man.

But, #2, her smile just creeps me out. Good job, if that was the intention.
The reason I chose #1 as a favorite, is because in #2, her body doesn't really have much shape to it. (except the boobs ofc [: ) And the wings, unless meant to be like that, aren't really proportional to her body. But I love the design in general. I'd like to see more art from you.

[Grell]

lol The second one was meant to creep people out. So I'm glad it worked ^ ^ And the proportions on the second one are something that I was going to fix (eventually). I got lazy and just scribbled mini wings in just to be funny.

Thank you for the feedback.

[Hardcore]

Really nice job though x_x With the smile and stuff. xDDD

And you're welcome

[Grell]

And so, I have much updated my DA. Also, I'll have a newer version of the second pic posted later today.

http://zemyxgrl.deviantart.com/