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My manga that I'm making with a friend.

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Ok.. the manga is... about.... gerbils. (I watch Hamtaro too much) The setting is in Feudal Japan. (the time of Inuyasha)

Story:

There's is 16-year old gerbil (just think that gerbils have human years in my manga) who lives with his Granda. His name is Aiko. His Grandpa(when he was young) found a sword. He tried to pull it from the ground but got blasted by a purple light, 'cuz he wasen't pure-hearted.....

So he tied a magical marble to the sword. And he then pulled it out with being blasted. It's 'cuz of the marble.

Now... Aiko's Grandpa wants him to take the family harloom. But Aiko won't. He dosen't care about a sword.

He goes to visit a princess gerbil, named Konohana. She changes his mind about the sword....

So he starts to care about the sword a little bit. But he still won't take the sword.

Very soon. A Demon Gerbil, named Goro kidnappes the Princess. Konohana has a Gem in her fore-head. The evil gerbil wants to destroy the gem so that the world will be destroyed. You see... the gem protects the world. The only way to destroy the gem... is to pull the gem out of the Princess' fore-head using a powerful spell. But the Goro needs to find golden fallen stars to create his spell.

So Aiko must reascue the Princess. He takes the family larloom's sword for he knows there's many dangers out there.

He later meets an Angel gerbil. She's the 2nd guardain of the Fallen Stars. She explains to him that there was once a Queen Angel who lived here. She's the expert Fallen Star guardian. But if the Stars that she guards falls from Heaven.... then she'll be turned to Star Dust. Goro used one of his evil spells to make the Stars fall to Earth, thus turning the Queen Angel to Star Dust. She then explains that Goro wants to destroy Earth by destroying the gem thats on Konohana's for-head. But the only way for him to pull it off is to collect all the Fallen Stars to create a spell which is the only thing that can pull the gem out of the Konohana. Aiko also learns that if his sword and all of the Fallen Stars combine... it'll create a tiny star which goes in a small star-shaped hole in the sword. That tiny star can make the sword more powerful AND bring the Queen Angel back to life making her and the 2nd Fallen Star Guardian become Star Sword guardians. Powering up the Aiko's sword is the only thing strong enough to slay Goro.

Now our main hero, must find and protect the Fallen Stars before evil finds them.

What do you think. I still need to add information on Goro more.
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Post by Infinite Twilight »

It sounds pretty cool. I'd read it!
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re: My manga that I'm making with a friend.

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Thanks.. however.. my friend goes to a forum that I don't visit alot... I have to get her to join this!
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So invite her to come here.
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Neon_Genesis wrote:So invite her to come here.
I did... I'm just waiting for her reply to my PM...
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Post by MewTaita »

Wow, I'm making a manga with my BFF, and it's about girls who have magic powers...
And then I'm making another manga with my BFF and my friend guy wich has a funnier storyline, 'cause they wear uniforms, and my character is the pretty, popular and perfect, so she says to the principal; "My doctor says I can't wear uniforms Cause they make me look fat" HAHAHAHAHA I still think kish is amazingly hot!__! >_<
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