My song :)

[josh]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkOoIl41Ono

Criticism welcome, hope u like it

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

[Yellowsakura]

uh.....ok....

[josh]

f u. go to hell

nah im just sad that u didn't like it

[Yellowsakura]

i did like it actually

[OniKira]

u should post a whole song, not just 20 seconds of it!

Post more of it! I wanna hear the rest!

[josh]

That was the whole song lol

Im working on a more complex original now lol, i'll show u that if I ever record it(i probably will record it)

I haven't had singing lessons..i want them

glad u liked it Yellowsakura

[Hey]

I can't make out the last part, specially if they have what? (and I'm interested in this because I want to see if you and I favour the same thing in a playground)

Excellent! I'd totally sign you up.

Project ideas:
- A duet with your brother
- An Aaron theme song
Example:
Aaron! du dun dun dun, he's the go-to guuuuy. He'll make everything alriiiiiight, and won't ask you whyyyyyyy, you're wearing a tiiiiie. Aaron! He eats his veggieeeees! He'll travel the world, far and wide, to understand the reason why, He's got such powers insiiiiiide!

--guitar solo, rock out--

A-A-R-O-N, No one calls him Ben, cause that's not his name. He has great love inside, to give and no, not hide. Oh baby baby babai. He's got love inside.
Mmmhmm! Uuh! Yeah! Inside-uh!

--end softly with piano--





*the first part kinda sounds like Pokemon's theme song. How unoriginal. Whenever I hear "theme song" I automatically think, Pokemon. Or... a team of asian-lispers. "Team Sung", dig it?


Anyway, you get the idea. And if not, well I tried... Wait, I'll be very angry if you didn't! because that! up there! took skill! And if you didn't, I'd like my skill back.

[Raoul Duke]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkOoIl41Ono

Criticism welcome, hope u like it

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

I'm glad that I only have to go to MESC involuntarily twice more in my entire life. The sandpit sucks. Its...well, nonexistent.

My criticism is this: That chord progression and melody line, and the lyrics, were clearly constructed in an order designed to intentionally be really stupid and not serious. So there.


Post up something cooler.

[josh]

Anner I say 'especially if they have a sandpit' But i like swings and slides a lot too. As for your project ideas, i'll consider them

Aristolle at our school there isn't exactly a sandpit, but there is a long jump thing which has a pit of sand at the end. Near the cricket nets where the smoker boys hang
my songs about myself and playgrounds not school ..

hi

[Duelist of the Twilight]

like the guitar. nice song so far.

[josh]

thanks

[Duelist of the Twilight]

You're welcome ^_^